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No monsters, dear.

Just me...

Hissss.
For #SixWordStories and #theWrittenRevolution's 52 Week Challenge.

Week 42: Write a six word story that relates to Halloween. It must be scary!

Happy Halloween!
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The first line seems almost.. endearing, if that makes sense? It's like... fond, almost, but that could just be in a perverse kind of way, I guess you could say.

The ellipses is potent in impact with the way it prepares us for more... and trails off, as if to further emphasise the horrific situation of it all.

Makes you wonder what it is, even though you've got the last line as a hint.